HNN FINALLY QAQ After 5 days of work. This is her official reference. I tried different colors and different coloring styles to make my art less bright and more simple.
She has two outfits. The full body is her main and the chibi is her second outfit. Which do you guys like better? *u*
I hope you guys think the color choices are better. Critique's are happily accepted! Let me know if anything is off or something I could have done better ^u^ I thank =Yamio and =PuripuriEve for helping me put it all together <3333
OH MY GOSH, PIICHE, YOU ARE TRYING TO KILL ME~ I cannot get over how cute she is! Every time I see her, I just want to draw her. I think you did a wonderful job making this! I really like how both of her references look! ♡
gasdhsakjdhsjfh I didn't even recognize this as your art at first! ; A ; This is so amazing! Your coloring is really amazing here! ; v ; As usual the hair looks gorgeous~ <3 I really like her new outfit, It's adorable! * A * The flow on the dress looks really good and the coloring on it is so aljsdlksaj eyegasmic. <3 Great job on this Kitty! ; w ; <3333
I confess I do like the "dusty-rose" shade of pink here, a cooler shade, better than the brighter pinks....I also like both outfits--it seems to me the pinafore looks best on the chibi, as here, and the apron on the full-body because she, ermm, looks more adult there. I like the stylized bow on the chibi, and the slightly more realistic one on the full-body---can't decide which overall look I like best!
It's cute, and I can see the change in coloring, but for the full body, her head's size is nice, but the body overall is a bit too small. XD Those are fine with chibis, but the shoulders' width should be wider than the head itself. Other than that, nice job!
There's a lot of people begging for crits on their stuff, if you look for them. I'm one of them <_> But since Piiche is popular, it's good to see her accept crits since popular people on here tend to not do so. Not all of them, but most of the one's I've encountered.
You said you wanted critique, and I like giving critiques, so here we go~
First of all, the thing I noticed immediately is that her face seemed a bit imbalanced. Something just seemed off. After taking a few moments to keep staring her face down, I realized that her left eye is farther away from her nose than the right eye. Like, if you drew a line down the middle of her face, it wouldn't be symmetrical because of the eye.
I also find that her eyebrows seem too high. Eyebrows tend to be sort of close to the eyes, even in typical anime style.
The last thing that bothered me anatomy-wise is the fact that her arms don't go down the full length. I'm not sure if you know, but arms and hands end between the hip and knee on the legs. I'd say about a third way down, actually. I can't tell where her arms end in either the full body nor chibi.
Just going to note that the shading and light source seems to be all over the place. I think it would look better if you picked a single light source and went from there. And also, the new colouring style's a bit too bright for my tastes. She just seems so pale and bright I feel like she doesn't go outside a lot. Maybe try darkening her up to f1d8b5. It's still kind of light imo and it has more of a skin tone to it.
Other than that, I think that her outfit's really cute. I like the clothing folds and the first outfit's design. I like the shading on her hair. I like the cell and smooth shading combo. Just try out the suggestions above and I hope you keep improving~