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hello there :>
i don't like it when i see an artist has requested a critique and no one has bothered :iconlazeplz: so here i go

. the pose and anatomy looks very good so far
. her face and hair look very sweet and i like the detail you put into them

. her arms are my main issue, her right arm should be shorter after her elbow cause if she straightened her arm her hands would be past her knees
. her left hand looks awkward. 1st it is bigger then her right hand, and the position of her fingers looks uncomfortable. Instead of her middle finger going to her ring finger i could just be straight, plus the hand should be more under the cup (if that makes any sense). Here are some images that might help you [link] [link] [link] if those aren't really what you were imaging then I say you can always take a cup and hold it your self in the way you want and ref that C:
. I would personally give her a bigger forehead, by just raising the hair/fringe higher, but that is more down to style then proportions

So, overall i really like the anatomy and how this drawing has started, but to improve it you can fix the hand/arms. I look forward to seeing the final picture :iconcoolplz:
good luck and I hope you found some help in this critique
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Hi piiche-chan :D
Just wanted to write a drawing is not as good as yours, but critism is always good!!
First of all, your coloring style is really soft, sweet and really just pulls the lineart together nicely. it works so well with making her look just so sweet and innocent! The mixture of Cell and soft cell...its just so great!! The shine also is not too much or not to little, but still gives her the affect of being in a bright room. One problem i had was the cat was kind of plain compared to the lighting of the girl, i barely noticed him at first! Besides that, Keep up the good work!!!
Another thing i loved loved loved is the eyes and outfit. you got really creative with the eyes. the hearts on the inside make her look even more innocent and ultra cute! Her outfit is simple, but is a great design for chibis and all the bows just add to the cute design.
As with looking at the early lineart, I was able to notice more mistakes with the girl. In my opinion, the arms are longer then a legs. I dont think its as much as a mistake with the arms as it is the legs. The legs are just a tad bit smaller then they need to be for both the size of the arms and the body. Two other problems i had was the glasses. Glasses need to be equal and the right lens just seem off. The placeing of the left lens is perfect for her, though!
Besides all that, your drawing is so so Adorable!!!! I can tell you put alot of time and work into this and it came out so nice! All mistakes where minor and there is not many. Good work, Piiche, and i cant wait for future drawings! ^w^
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Fifiski Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks cute ^_^
I like the colouring and the eyes are adorable :heart:

Thank you very much!
cautioncone16 Dec 15, 2012
Very cute! I wish I had a little maid
Thank you! Hehe
cautioncone16 Jan 13, 2013
Your welcome! :)
Thank you!
You're Welcome ^-^
cddmanful Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cute--love the glasses and the cat on her head~~~
She is an interesting OC!
Thank you!
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